Aug
Digging Deep into Your Characters
So after yesterday’s rant and downer on contests, let’s get to work on what I love most, creating characters. I love my characters. I love spending time with them, mulling over the problems facing them, how they are going to respond, but most importantly, how are they going to respond and why do they respond that way.
From birth, we all collect experiences that shape how we do everything. And if you want to create living, breathing characters you have to consider their experience as you the author write their story. Let me use Lady Hermione Marlowe, the heroine in my new book Tempted by the Night, as an example.

Hermione, much to her distress, is one of those Marlowes. The ramshackle family of the Earl of Walbrook, and the stigma of her missing father and her rather flamboyant mother follows her like a pair of great big, ugly traveling trunks. In the world of being perfect and being from the right family and making the perfect match, her parents, as much as she loves them, are two strikes she can do nothing about.
As I created Hermione, first in His Mistress by Morning as Charlotte’s best friend and the hero’s sister, and then by writing her story, I was struck by how deeply her insecurities ran. And therein lay the character flaw that I mined like gold. She is the daughter of an earl and therefore should be quite secure and lofty, and yet she is as lost in Society as the greenest country lass. But this flaw works because it strikes a chord in all of us. It will resonate with every reader because everyone has been tied up by their own insecurities at one time or another. And because she tries so hard to overcome them, we as the reader root for her to succeed. Because her success on a very deep level is ours as well.
So once I had discovered how deep her insecurities ran, especially when it came to her feelings for Rockhurst (to the point of throwing up when he comes near her), I then had to give her the tools and the power to overcome her fears. Because Hermione wanted everyone, especially the Earl of Rockhurst, to see her as an elegant young lady of Society, I therefore did the complete opposite and made her invisible. Unseen. Nadda. Nothing. And slowly Hermione discovers that outside her self-imposed limits, the strictures of a Society where she will never be just another member of the herd, she can come into her own.
So take your hero and heroine in your story, and dig around inside them and ask yourself:
1) What are their greatest fears? Try to discover something that most everyone can identify with.
2) How can you take your character right up to the dragon’s lair and have them face that fear?
3) What lessons, tools, and help will they need to win the battle?
4) What can we as readers learn from our character’s lesson?
This exercise helps outline your character’s development, steps in your plotting and the story arc. And one last note: make your heroine likeable. Nothing tanks a book faster than a bitchy heroine. Would you want her for your cubical mate in an office? If the answer is no, then why are you spending 6 to 9 to 12 months telling her story?
Likeable sells. So does a depth to character that tugs at the heart. Find what tugs at your heart and then write.

I would go one step further, and say make your hero likeable, too. I hate the so-called “dark hero”. “Dark hero” sounds to me like another name for slimeball and I call them villains. I’ll never read another story by authors who write these villains-as-heroes again, if I even finished the book in the first place.
I refuse to believe a decent man cannot be attractive. What keeps me buying your books is that your heroes are the decent men I like, and they are indeed wildly attractive.
I’ll be buying my copy of “Tempted by the Night” as soon as it’s released on Sept. 2. Can you write two books a year?
August 25th, 2008 at 7:46 amLinda, I agree about heroes. I have never been a fan of the bruising, rude, arrogant alpha hero. I love nice guys. I think there is a greater depth of heroism in them that is always overlooked and as a writer, I like to pull that out of my fellows.
Oh, and Tempted goes on sale tomorrow–so no waiting until next week!
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August 26th, 2008 at 7:49 amI’ll be purchasing my copy Friday! Although I’ve read the story, I always like to have one that isn’t an ARC. It’s my of supporting my favorite authors!
BTW, I can’t wait to read about Pippin and Tally!! Not to mention the ever so dashing Captain Dash!
August 27th, 2008 at 2:57 amHaven, Dash is there. And you might be a little shocked. Oh, he’s still a pirate . . .
August 27th, 2008 at 9:50 amOH I can’t wait!!
August 27th, 2008 at 8:58 pm