28
Feb

Building a Villain

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Playing to Win, the very first book I wrote is a romantic suspense. I’ve written many different genres since then, but one thing remains true. I love to add a suspense element and if I can sprinkle the odd body or two between the pages, so much the better.

Although a villain is essentially a secondary character in a romance, he or she needs just as much work during the creation process as the hero and heroine. There’s a trick or two I’ve learned to make a credible villain. I thought I’d share:

1. A villain doesn’t have to be really evil and horrid. The villain in a romance might be an old girlfriend, a brother or sister, a mother-in-law or the man living next-door. They can be a meddling friend who is trying to match make. You don’t need a high body count to make a villain. Villainy comes in many forms such as the ex-girlfriend intent on regaining the hero’s interest.

2. When you’re thinking about your villain, give him good points as well as bad ones. Make him three dimensional. If he’s a well-rounded character then he’s actually scarier because we, the reader, come to like him or we might see part of our own character in his makeup and empathize.

3. Think about having your villain mirror your hero or heroine actions. Give them a similar conflict but have them behave in a different way to solve the conflict.

4. Give your villains a good reason for behaving in the manner they are—in other words, good motivation for their actions.

5. Make use of the setting to enhance the villain i.e. cold or stormy weather or late at night. Every bit counts!

6. Take as much care when choosing your villain’s name as you do when picking a name for your hero and heroine. A good name can help make a villain.

How do you like your villains? Subtle or in-your-face? Who is your favorite villain in fiction? Are there any characteristics you like to see in a villain?

3 Responses to “Building a Villain”

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    Maggie Robinson Says:

    Right you are, and it’s good to give the hero some bad points too! I started a book where there was a dead body, but then worried because I know no forensic science or police/court procedure…and am too lazy to do research, LOL. We’ll see if I ever get back to it.

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    Diana Castilleja Says:

    I prefer my villians to be more subtle, not in your face characters. I’m not all that crazy about a villian’s POV either. Let me get my own impression, let the characters give theirs. I really like the romance first approach with the suspense added in to heighten the story.

    Really a good post. I was just thinking about this last night/this morning about a character I’m reading.

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    Shelley Munro Says:

    Maggie - yes, sometimes the sheer amount of reading and research required is mind-boggling. Although, of course it depends on the way you set up your book, too.

    Yes, heroes definitely need to be well-rounded with good and bad layers to their personality.

    Diana - I’ve written books were the villain has his/her own POV. It depends on the book, but on the whole I like to be kept guessing about the villain.

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